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Nick Buchheit's avatar

This story was nausea inducing. Just the thought of that monster? Inside my stomach. Yuck!! You did a great job making me feel that.

Love the ending too. Feels spot on!

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Rosie B's avatar

Oh, thank you! I am fascinated by teratomas they are so creepy, I’m so glad that came across. Thank you so much for reading and for your comments 🙏

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Nick Buchheit's avatar

I googled them because I honestly didn’t know anything about them. My stomach turned. Haha

If you ever feel like checking out my story for this event, The Black Dot In The Sky Follows, I would love your thoughts. It’s near the bottom of the list.

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Rosie B's avatar

Oh cool, yeah I’ll have a read!

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Stephen Duffy's avatar

That was a fun story, Rosie! ❤️

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Rosie B's avatar

Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it- thanks for reading!

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